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Bounty Hunting pg 1

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First page of a short comic I'm doing with my bounty hunter, Saffir. Don't know how fast i'll get pages out, but i have them all sketched already. :D

Pg 1: here
Pg 2: [link]

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Hey, sorry I've been gone... :(
I like the slash-through panel at the top, and the black spotting on the cat at the bottom looks really nice- it seems to follow the shape of the creature.

Quibble about the close-up on the eyes: Why is there a pair of studio lights directly in front of it? The highlights are... improbable, in the woods like that. I know it's convention, but surrounded by all the gorgeous watercolory, muted, shadowed backgrounds, these crisp, clear, artificial highlights kinda stick out.

On the next page, it's very pretty getting a closer look at the black cat, and some of the foliage, where it's against the water.